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All the Popular girlsAll the popular girls Throw their shit right at me. The way I dress, The way I think, I’m who I wanna be.All the Popular girls
I can’t afford your fashions At the price of my soul. You can’t avoid this faction Welcome to the real world
Whatever I want, Whatever I think. You’ve got no hold on me. I must drive you insane.
I don’t play the homecoming queen. I don’t worship your clique. Just another dramatic scene. It’s all making me sick.
Whatever I want, Whatever I think. You’ve got no hold o
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"Falling Away“Falling Away”"Falling Away
It’s so quiet here. Can you even hear me speaking? It’s so quiet here. My only saving grace is leaving.
The rain falls outside my window, But I can’t hear it pouring. The nightingales are singing, But even now their voice is gone.
Can you hear me now? Can you even stop for a moment? Can you feel me now? Please let me know I’m real.
I don’t want to fade away. I don’t wanna lose myself To the darkness. I don’t want to be afraid. I don’t want to see myse
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You should go look at my new stuff, too. And you should put up some new stuff!
1) You learned something form it.
2) It invokes an emotional reaction, we recognize what your trying to tell us. We can read the character.
3) Technical skill
1 and 2 I feel being the most important. 3 just tops everything off.
Your still learning and have much to do! Problem with critiquing your gallery is I really feel there\'s nothing to critique. I definently see improvement in your skills how ever I don\'t see any point to any of them other then practice!
You know what I mean? I don\'t really get much out of your chracters and fan art so far. I don\'t see any story being told. It\'s a person, but there not doing anything
I would like to see more things that tell stories about the chracter then I feel there\'s purpose to the drawing and something to critque
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The Feeling That Doesn't Reach
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You get: [link]
For example this tells a story and it's still fan art. [link] the chracters are communicating to you, I see the point of the piece.
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The Feeling That Doesn't Reach
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You get: [link]
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Into the fire, she swallowed their hate.
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